You will forget everything about me after some time, I know..
You will forget my name, my talk, my love everything..
And you will be very busy in your world..
But I promise you if I really loved you..
I will never bother you again and will never ask you to come back
If by chance we meet again..I'll not look at you
But there is something more I want to say…
You were my first love and you will be my last..
I can never erase you from my memory
I can never stop loving you…never ..
There are a lot to say but you'll never understand
Because you never loved me by your heart
But you know what?
You'll be the first and last person who hurt me most in my life :(
beautiful nishh... lovely presentation of pain of separation.. and the last line "You'll be the first and last person who hurt me most in my life " is most heart wrenching.. which shows the regret, anger and disbelief in love, only things left with us after that person.
ReplyDeleteThanks..this poem is very close to my heart, as this is the part of my book, that hopefully will publish soon *Fingers crossed*
Deletewaiting eagerly for The moment .. All the very Best!! :)
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Deleteshut up
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I am not gonna leave you my friend
thanks :P
DeleteBeautifully written Nishu. Somewhere in life, we all can relate ourselves to these. We love, we break up, we whine, we move on, we forget and then we compromise. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you have finally understood, this word called "love"..I hope you never go through that again, stay blessed!
ReplyDeletenyc....remember me?
ReplyDeletethanks...no i dont remember you?
ReplyDeleteits aman chhabra great inni jaldi bhool gye :/
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DeleteThanks Nishi for this short yet super touchy poem. Wish you all the best. Hope it gets published very soon and I can then proudly tell that I had read it before :D
ReplyDeletethanks Arpan. *Fingers crossed*
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